what did i do well? the title was bright and bold.
what did i learn? that you should have a glossary.
what will i do better next time? i need to put science into the presentation.
Monday, May 24, 2010
Thursday, May 20, 2010
terafing tornadoes
http://qzealand.edu.glogster.com/terifining-tornadoes/
what did i do well? i think i did well in the information.
what did i learn? that tornadoes are winds spinning villainy out of control.
what will i do better next time? put a video in the presentation.
what did i do well? i think i did well in the information.
what did i learn? that tornadoes are winds spinning villainy out of control.
what will i do better next time? put a video in the presentation.
Wednesday, May 12, 2010
mjy pi feedback
scratchy but cool aidan,thomas
WOW Emma we thought your P.I was awesome and we loved your guinea pigs. We liked how you told us the story of the day you first got them. Libby, Kate and Alana
great PI on gunnie pigs emma they are really cute and we think you put a huge amount of work into it so congrats emma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mike and caelum
Cool Pi Emma we liked how you made it interactive but next time have a bit more information about the topic. Lucy, Maddy, Grace, Zia
we really loved your pi and you put a lot of effort into it auesome!!!also we did not know that gunnie pigs like the darkit was relly cool!!!!!! and cute!!!!!! Sophie,Sara
Wow amazing PI it was the best,the guinea pigs were soooooooooo cute and we found out heaps about guinea pigs.well done!!!!!!!!!!!! Nat.Linda
We think that it was a good idear to bring your pets along but maybe next time you can put a little bit more of info into your topic Britt and Kelly.
It was a good idea and I liked how you choose it to be about gunnie pigs. Oliver
We think that you did very well and not just the guinea pig all your info as well and we liked how you brought the guinea pigs into the class well done!!!!!!! Hadley Corbin
COOL Emma we liked your guinea pigs harry,chaz
cool P.I. emma it was fun getting to hold the guinea pig. Alan & Caleb
i think you did well congrats emma and cute guinapigs. you did good and i liked crunchie. Hannah and natalya
WOW Emma we thought your P.I was awesome and we loved your guinea pigs. We liked how you told us the story of the day you first got them. Libby, Kate and Alana
great PI on gunnie pigs emma they are really cute and we think you put a huge amount of work into it so congrats emma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mike and caelum
Cool Pi Emma we liked how you made it interactive but next time have a bit more information about the topic. Lucy, Maddy, Grace, Zia
we really loved your pi and you put a lot of effort into it auesome!!!also we did not know that gunnie pigs like the darkit was relly cool!!!!!! and cute!!!!!! Sophie,Sara
Wow amazing PI it was the best,the guinea pigs were soooooooooo cute and we found out heaps about guinea pigs.well done!!!!!!!!!!!! Nat.Linda
We think that it was a good idear to bring your pets along but maybe next time you can put a little bit more of info into your topic Britt and Kelly.
It was a good idea and I liked how you choose it to be about gunnie pigs. Oliver
We think that you did very well and not just the guinea pig all your info as well and we liked how you brought the guinea pigs into the class well done!!!!!!! Hadley Corbin
COOL Emma we liked your guinea pigs harry,chaz
cool P.I. emma it was fun getting to hold the guinea pig. Alan & Caleb
i think you did well congrats emma and cute guinapigs. you did good and i liked crunchie. Hannah and natalya
Sunday, May 9, 2010
my pi matrix
Expert
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Clearly started at the last minute
Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
what did i learn? that guinea pigs like the dark
what did i do well? i didn't leave my presontation to the last minute.
what will i do better next time? try to put more pages into my book.
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Clearly started at the last minute
Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
what did i learn? that guinea pigs like the dark
what did i do well? i didn't leave my presontation to the last minute.
what will i do better next time? try to put more pages into my book.
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