Monday, May 24, 2010

my glog assessment

what did i do well? the title was bright and bold.
what did i learn? that you should have a glossary.
what will i do better next time? i need to put science into the presentation.

Thursday, May 20, 2010

terafing tornadoes

what did i do well? i think i did well in the information.
what did i learn? that tornadoes are winds spinning villainy out of control.
what will i do better next time? put a video in the presentation.

Wednesday, May 12, 2010

my knolege test

i think i did really well in the division because i didn't really know how to do it.

mjy pi feedback

scratchy but cool aidan,thomas
WOW Emma we thought your P.I was awesome and we loved your guinea pigs. We liked how you told us the story of the day you first got them. Libby, Kate and Alana
great PI on gunnie pigs emma they are really cute and we think you put a huge amount of work into it so congrats emma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mike and caelum
Cool Pi Emma we liked how you made it interactive but next time have a bit more information about the topic. Lucy, Maddy, Grace, Zia
we really loved your pi and you put a lot of effort into it auesome!!!also we did not know that gunnie pigs like the darkit was relly cool!!!!!! and cute!!!!!! Sophie,Sara
Wow amazing PI it was the best,the guinea pigs were soooooooooo cute and we found out heaps about guinea pigs.well done!!!!!!!!!!!! Nat.Linda
We think that it was a good idear to bring your pets along but maybe next time you can put a little bit more of info into your topic Britt and Kelly.
It was a good idea and I liked how you choose it to be about gunnie pigs. Oliver
We think that you did very well and not just the guinea pig all your info as well and we liked how you brought the guinea pigs into the class well done!!!!!!! Hadley Corbin
COOL Emma we liked your guinea pigs harry,chaz
cool P.I. emma it was fun getting to hold the guinea pig. Alan & Caleb
i think you did well congrats emma and cute guinapigs. you did good and i liked crunchie. Hannah and natalya

Sunday, May 9, 2010

my pi matrix

 Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
 Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

 Shows three or four weeks of work
 Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
 Some interaction
 Audience is attentive
Speech is clear

Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of it for me
 No interaction with the audience
 No humour
 Poor presentation
Few pictures

 Clearly started at the last minute
 Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
 No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

what did i learn? that guinea pigs like the dark
what did i do well? i didn't leave my presontation to the last minute.
what will i do better next time? try to put more pages into my book.